Tuesday, January 10, 2012

'Revelations', a poem about life. C/c, if you please?

Somewhat ragged in your beats per line, like 11 beats in S4L3 while only 7 for example in S3L4. Most were 8. As to the message, always worthwhile but also one stated a lot already. This didn't cover any new ground for me but you were consistent and your rhyme scheme seemed natural.

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