I think the idea of calling him after some candy is absolutely brilliant. The Jolly Rancher, it has a certain ring to it that you don't hear very often. However, the plot is quite predictable. I know he was going to start killing them off as soon as you said his wife got shot. You should change why he did it because revenge is a little obvious too. Also, why not have it so he puts his victims in his candy, that way it would be like a candy version of Sweeney Todd. Very cool indeed.
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